It just needs more to it. It's a good start. Hit me up at firstname.lastname@example.org and we can collaborate a bit. I can get some vocals kickin if you got lyrics and if not maybe I can write some. I play all instruments so a bass line and some lead guitar could be cool too. You can hear my music right here. Check my stuff out and see if we are on the same page. I don't check my stuff here very often so just write me at my e-mail.
Thank you for the great review! I love Green Machine and would love to work with you.
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